Open Letter To Editors That Should Be Required Reading (Do Not Edit)

By NFLSportChannel

Published: March 26, 2009

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... example.  If I screw up and say "round #1" instead of "first round" let's just assume readers are not too stupid to figure that out.

I'm going to write a not funny humor piece to give you examples.  Notes to editors in italics.

Tom Brady is Christ and Bill Belichick the Anti-Christ and robert Kraft is the Puppet Master from Marvel Comics that somehow has control of two immortal beings at once.

That sentence is poorly constructed.  If you changed it to three sentences, fine.  If you corrected the capitalization, fine.

Now we will get into things you might change that are not fine Tom Brady, Bill Belichick, and Bob Kraft are the QB, coach, and owner of the New England Patriots.  The tag of Patriots is NOT extraneous.  The Patriots play in the AFC East.   That tag is NOT extraneous.

Tom Brady's career was killed by Pontius Pilate, I mean Lloyd Carr at Mi...

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